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The graph below shows the different in wheat exports over three different countries.

The graph below shows the different in wheat exports over three different countries. 7VRy
The line graph depicts the ratio of wheat exports in three different countries namely, Australia, Canada and European Community from 1985 to 1990. Unit measures in million of tonnes. Observing the details, exact 15 million tonnes wheat exported by Australia in 1985 and it increased slightly in the next year. But, then there was a gradual decline observed till 1990 and accounted for 10 million tonnes. For Canada, the rate of export of wheat started from around 20 million tonnes; whereas, this figure dropped in the next year. However, there was a rapid growth noted in wheat exports and stood at 25 million tonnes in 1988. Before this figure increased dramatically around 20 million tonnes in 1990, it decreased significantly in 1989. Furthermore, in 1985, approximately 16 million tonnes of wheat exported by European Community; while, it remained steady till 1988. But, then it rose and reached at just over 20 million tonnes in 1990. Overall, it can be clearly seen that, the ratio of wheat exports followed up ward tendencyin European Community; while, Australia followed down ward trend. Also, the wheat exports rate remained unchanged for Canada during 1985 to 1990.
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and stood at 25
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exported by European Community; while, it remained steady till 1988.
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rate remained unchanged for Canada during 1985 to 1990.
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