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The map shows the village park, now and 10 years ago. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the village park, now and 10 years ago. g01d
The pictorical diagrams depot the present and 10 years before layout of the village park. overall, it can be seen that the refreshments area is improve and s new path for fucking is construct around the park boundary in the current plan. The entrance to the park was located to the north-west corner and it pemain unchanged during the period. 10 years ago, the park allowed a parking area to the north-west with the limit of 20 cars at a time and parking facility is extended now by adding area 4 tennis courts are to the north-east of car parking, whereas, only 2 tennis court are there before 10 years. The area for children's play ground is reduced now by adding children's soft park with it. A new path for cycling is construct around the park. 10 years before, there was a large square area were assigned for football pitch in the exact center of the village park, but now the space for football pitch is reduced and a new toilet i build next to it. A new picnic area is construct to the outh-west area and the pond is replaced by boating lake. Now a new cafe is added to the south-east corner for refreshments by cutting down the woods.
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diagrams depot the present and 10 years
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layout of the village park.

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overall
, it can be
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seen
that the
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refreshments
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area
is
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and s
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new
path for
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fucking
is construct around the
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park
boundary in the
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current
plan.

The entrance to the
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park
was located
to the north-west corner and it
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pemain
unchanged during the period. 10 years ago, the
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park
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allowed
a parking
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area
to the north-west with the limit of 20 cars at a time and parking facility
is extended
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now
by adding
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area
4 tennis courts are to the north-east of car parking, whereas,
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only
2 tennis court are there
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before
10 years. The
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area
for children's play ground is
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reduced
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now
by adding children's soft
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park
with it. A
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path for cycling is construct around the
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park. 10
years
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, there was a large square
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were assigned
for football pitch in the exact center of the village
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park
,
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now
the space for football pitch is
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toilet
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build
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picnic
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is construct to the
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outh-west
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and the pond
is replaced
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boating


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lake
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added
to the south-east corner for refreshments by cutting down the woods.
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IELTS academic The map shows the village park, now and 10 years ago.

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