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he chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows that people moving from countryside to central city in three countries ( Iran, Indonesia and Russia) since 2000 and the forecast for 25 years later. Overall, it is clear that there was a sharp increase movement of people from rural to urban areas. In details, all three countries started with similar numbers of urban migrants in 2000. Russian began with the most migrants (around 15 million ) and over the period sees significant increases, particularly between 2010 and 2015 ( about 42 to 70 million) with this upward trend is predicted to continue to approximately 86 million by 2025. Moreover, Iran after a slow start between 2000 and 2015 sees a dramatic rise in movement to urban areas. And then kept going up to exactly 80 million and this increase is forecasted to almost 100 million. However, Indonesia bucks the trend somewhat. Whilst consistently steady between 2000 and 2020, its growth is far less dramatic than other two countries ( 10 to 30 million). Furthermore, post 2020, it is predicted to level off at about 30 million.
The chart below
shows
that
people
moving from countryside to central city in three countries
(
Iran, Indonesia and Russia) since 2000 and the forecast for 25 years later.

Overall
, it is
clear
that there was a sharp increase movement of
people
from rural to urban areas.

In
details
, all three countries
started
with similar numbers of urban migrants in 2000. Russian began with the most migrants (around 15
million
)
and over the period
sees
significant increases,
particularly
between 2010 and 2015
(
about 42 to 70
million)
with this upward trend
is predicted
to continue to approximately 86
million
by 2025.

Moreover
, Iran after a slow
start
between 2000 and 2015
sees
a dramatic rise in movement to urban areas. And then
kept
going up to exactly 80
million
and this increase
is forecasted
to almost 100 million.

However
, Indonesia bucks the trend somewhat. Whilst
consistently
steady between 2000 and 2020, its growth is far less dramatic than other two countries
(
10 to 30
million)
.
Furthermore
, post 2020, it
is predicted
to level off at about 30
million
.
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IELTS academic he chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years.

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