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Group activities need more than one person working together to complete a task or assignment. Many believe that by working in a team, people develop their individual mental aptitude more. However, others think that intellectual skills are not only improved by doing group activities but also exceeded by working solitary. I think that working in a group can increase the mental capability of human beings through their thinking and decision-making abilities.

Group activities need more than one person working together to complete a task or assignment. Many believe that by working in a team, people develop their individual mental aptitude more. However, others think that intellectual skills are not only improved by doing group activities but also exceeded by working solitary. I think that working in a group can increase the mental capability of human beings through their thinking and decision-making abilities. ewL0A
Group activities need more than one person working together to complete a task or assignment. Many believe that by working in a team, people develop their individual mental aptitude more. However, others think that intellectual skills are not only improved by doing group activities but also exceeded by working solitary. I think that working in a group can increase the mental capability of human beings through their thinking and decision-making abilities.
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IELTS academic Group activities need more than one person working together to complete a task or assignment. Many believe that by working in a team, people develop their individual mental aptitude more. However, others think that intellectual skills are not only improved by doing group activities but also exceeded by working solitary. I think that working in a group can increase the mental capability of human beings through their thinking and decision-making abilities.

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