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Green house gases emissions by Australian households

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These two pie charts show information about household energy use in Australia and the resulting greenhouse emissions. While heating is the greatest use of energy, it is not the greatest producer of greenhouse gases. Greenhouse gases are produced by water heating more than any other source. The first pie chart displays information about the use of energy in the average Australian house. Here, heating requires the most energy, at 42% of the total, followed by water heating at a little over a third. The smallest fraction is cooling at just 2% of the total energy use. Surprisingly, while heating uses 42% of the total energy use, it only causes 15% of the total greenhouse gases. However, water heating is more or less proportional to its total use, producing a little less than a third of the greenhouse gases emitted by the average household. Refrigeration produces 14% of the total emissions, despite only using 7% of the house’s energy
These two pie charts
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in Australia and the resulting
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emissions. While
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heating
is the greatest
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, it is not the greatest producer of
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.
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are produced
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more than any other source.

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in the average Australian
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requires the most
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, at 42% of the
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, followed by water
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at a
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over a third. The smallest fraction is cooling at
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2% of the
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42% of the
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, it
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, water
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is more or less proportional to its
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, producing a
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emitted by the average household. Refrigeration produces 14% of the
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emissions, despite
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IELTS academic Green house gases emissions by Australian households

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