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The graphs show the value of exports from Bartonville from 2008 to 2013.

The graphs show the value of exports from Bartonville from 2008 to 2013. 75YVb
The two line graphs illustrate the number of exports in total and in four selected categories (fuel, food, cars and palm oil) in Bartonville between 2008 and 2013. Overall, the value of exports dipped in 2010 before it rose over the period given. For the four different categories; while fuel and cars experienced a decrease in export earnings, palm oil witnessed the opposite trend. Food remained steady over the period given. Looking at the total value of exports in Bartonville, it started at 120 million dollars in 2008, dipped to just over 60 million dollars in 2010 before rising dramatically to just below 160 million by the end of the period. In regards to fuel and palm oil, in 2008, fuel was the highest export commodity, accounted for around 22 million dollars in 2008, while palm oil was the lowest with approximately 2 million. The exportation of fuel experienced a dip to 8 million in 2010 before falling dramatically to 5 million in the final year. In contrast, there was a remarkable increase for about ten times over the period discussed for palm oil. As for cars and food, they had just below 15 and just above 5 million dollars of exports in the beginning respectively. While cars saw a steady rise to 18 million and followed by a considerable decline to just below 10 million dollars, food export stayed relatively unchanged.
The two line graphs illustrate the number of
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in total and in four selected categories
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(fuel
,
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food
,
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cars
and
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palm
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oil)
in
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Bartonville
between 2008 and 2013.

Overall
, the value of
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exports
dipped in 2010
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before
it rose
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over
the period
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given
. For the four
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different
categories; while
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fuel
and
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cars
experienced a decrease in
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export
earnings,
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palm
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oil
witnessed the opposite trend.
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Food
remained steady
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over
the period
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given
.

Looking at the total value of
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exports
in
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Bartonville
, it
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started
at 120
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million
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in 2008, dipped to
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just
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over
60
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million
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in 2010
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rising
dramatically
to
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just
below 160
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million
by the
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end
of the period.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
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fuel
and
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palm
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oil
, in 2008,
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fuel
was the highest
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export
commodity, accounted for around 22
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million
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dollars
in 2008, while
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palm
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oil
was the lowest with approximately 2
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million
. The exportation of
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fuel
experienced a dip to 8
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million
in 2010
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before
falling
dramatically
to 5
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million
in the final year.
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, there was a remarkable increase for about ten times
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over
the period discussed for
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palm
oil.

As for
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cars
and
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food
, they had
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just
below 15 and
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just
above 5
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million
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of
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exports
in the beginning
respectively
. While
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cars
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saw
a steady rise to 18
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million
and followed by a considerable decline to
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just
below 10
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million
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dollars
,
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food
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export
stayed
relatively
unchanged.
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