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The pie chart illustrates the percentage of Coal, Gas, Nuclear, petrol and other typesof enery, which was mede in france during 1995 and 2005. Oveall, France reduced production of petro in the second period , and increase the manufacture of other source of energy.

The pie chart illustrates the percentage of Coal, Gas, Nuclear, petrol and other typesof enery, which was mede in france during 1995 and 2005. Oveall, France reduced production of petro in the second period, and increase the manufacture of other source of energy. mbean
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of Coal, Gas, Nuclear, petrol and other typesof enery, which was mede in france during 1995 and 2005. Oveall, France reduced production of petro in the second period, and increase the manufacture of other source of energy. in detail, petro was produced by the ratio of 29. 27% in 1995, but after five years it's production rate decrease by 10%, and accounted for 19. 55% in 2005. As petro amount plummeted, the amount of rest another resources soar: nuclear energy was 6. 40% before, and latter, it saw increase of about 10% become 10%. GAs and coal also saw a rose about 1% in their ratios. As well as, Unnamed energy was genreated 5%, more than first period in france.
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