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The diagrams indicate the steps and tools which is used to produce cement, then they illustrate the process of concrete-making.

The diagrams indicate the steps and tools which is used to produce cement, then they illustrate the process of concrete-making. n1B7o

The diagrams indicate the steps and tools which is used to produce cement, then they illustrate the process of concrete-making. Overall, it is evident that cement and concrete production processes totally require six steps before it colcludes. Meanwhile, it begins with crushing limestone and clay and ends with packinging and using for producing concrete At the first step, this procedure usually commences with the crushing of limestone and clay by a crusher, then they become a powder. After that, they are mixed by a mixer, which is connected with a roll in the next stage. This mixture comes across a rotating heater, which has a heat used fire in the bottom, to become a darker material. Afterward, this product of the previous step is grinded by a specialize tool to be transfomed cement, then it is packaged. The cement made in this process is the ingredient to produce concrete. Particularly, it is put into a mixture, which has 15% of cement, half of gravel, 10% of water and a quarter of sand. Lastly, this mixture is poured to a mixer, and become concrete.

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, half of gravel, 10% of water and a quarter of sand. Lastly
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