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The pie chart shows the percentage of total volume of Coco-Cola’s unit case volume by region in 2000. And line graph depicts the price of this fizzy drink in dollar from 1996 to 2001. The global consumption of Coca-Cola is 17. 1 billion. This fizzy drink is consumed most in North America that is 30. 4%. Latin America also fairly contributes in the consumption by 25. 7%. Europe and Asia are consuming 20. 5% and 16. 4% respectively. The least consuming continents are Africa and Middle East together was merely 7. 0%. In 1996, the price of Coca-Cola was $35, which later drastically increased to approx. $65 in 1997. There was a fall in price from 1997 to 1998 to $55. Then again, a sudden upward movement from 1998 to 1999 was seen. Price was the highest ever seen at $85. Later from 1999 to 2000 prices fell gradually at $45, which was lowest since 1996. Till mid 2000 the prices were rising and fell again in 2001 at $55.
The pie chart
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shows
the percentage of total volume of Coco-Cola’s unit case volume by region in 2000. And line graph depicts the
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price
of this fizzy drink in dollar from 1996 to 2001.

The global consumption of Coca-Cola is 17. 1 billion. This fizzy drink
is consumed
most in North America
that is
30. 4%. Latin America
also
fairly
contributes in the consumption by 25. 7%. Europe and Asia are consuming 20. 5% and 16. 4%
respectively
. The least consuming continents are Africa and Middle East together was
merely
7. 0%.

In 1996, the
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price
of Coca-Cola was $35, which later
drastically
increased to approx. $65 in 1997. There was a fall in
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price
from 1997 to 1998 to $55. Then again, a sudden upward movement from 1998 to 1999 was
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seen
.
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Price
was the highest ever
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seen
at $85. Later from 1999 to 2000
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prices
fell
gradually
at $45, which was lowest since 1996. Till mid 2000 the
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prices
were rising and fell again in 2001 at $55.
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IELTS academic coca cola prices in different nations

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