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The line graph outlines energy consumption in the USA from 1980 to the present day, with further projections up until 2030. Use is recorded in quadrillion units and is divided in to six categories, almost all of which display a general increase over time

The line graph outlines energy consumption in the USA from 1980 to the present day, with further projections up until 2030. Use is recorded in quadrillion units and is divided in to six categories, almost all of which display a general increase over time YRMq5
The line graph illustrates the USA energy consumption by fuel from 1980 and the prediction to 2030. Overall, while the use of hydropower decreased slightly, an upward trend was seen and is predicted in the others consuming. It is clearly that petrol and oil have been being in the first place during the project’s time. Petrol and oil having a huge gap between others fuel, fluctuated from 1980 ( 35 units ) to 2007 ( 39 units ) following by a gradual increase to about 50 units in 2030. However, coal consumed’ trend is different from petrol and oil which has been being and forecast to increase dramatically from the third ( 16 units ) to the second at about 29 units throughout the period. Regarding natural gas, a minority grew from 1980 ( 20 units ) to 2013 ( 23 units ) prior to a stable pattern at the same figure until 2030. About 3 last fuel having a similar stating point in 1980 at 3 units, has been consumed differently from 1980 to 2030. While there has been a considerable growth in the amount of nuclear and solar/wind’s units predicting to be at 7 units and 6 units, respectively, the hydropower figure is guessed to decline to about 3 units in 2030
The line graph illustrates the USA energy consumption by fuel from 1980 and the prediction to 2030.
Overall
, while the
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use
of hydropower decreased
slightly
, an upward trend was
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seen
and
is predicted
in the others consuming. It is
clearly
that petrol and oil have been being in the
first
place during the project’s time.

Petrol and oil having a huge gap between others fuel, fluctuated
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from 1980 ( 35
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to 2007
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39
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following by a gradual increase to about 50
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in 2030.
However
, coal consumed’ trend is
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different
from petrol and oil which has been being and forecast to increase
dramatically
from the third
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(
16
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)
to the second at about 29
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throughout the period. Regarding natural gas, a minority grew
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from 1980 ( 20
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to 2013
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(
23
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units
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)
prior to a stable pattern at the same figure until 2030.

About 3 last fuel having a similar stating point in 1980 at 3
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units
, has
been consumed
differently
from 1980 to 2030. While there has been a considerable growth in the amount of nuclear and solar/wind’s
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units
predicting to be at 7
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units
and 6
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,
respectively
, the hydropower figure
is guessed
to decline to about 3
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units
in 2030
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IELTS academic The line graph outlines energy consumption in the USA from 1980 to the present day, with further projections up until 2030. Use is recorded in quadrillion units and is divided in to six categories, almost all of which display a general increase over time

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