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Graph showing consumption of fish and meet in 1979 to 2004

Graph showing consumption of fish and meet in 1979 to 2004 aAgGV
The line graph illustrates the amount of 4 kinds of meat (chicken, lamb, meat and fish) consumed in a European country from 1979 to 2004. Units are measures in grams per person per week. Overall, the consumption of chicken has increased over the time period whereas beef and lamb consumed by Europeans have decline. consuming fish has also dropped over the time frame. Initially, 150 grams of chicken was consumed in 1979 which rose to nearly 250 grams by the final years. In terms of fish the consumption was just over 50 grams in 1979 and it has reduced to below 50 in 2004. On contrast to this the consumption of beef and lamb were higher in 1979 and there has been a drop towards the year 2004, where 200 grams to nearly 100 grams and 150 grams to nearly 60 grams respectively.
The line graph illustrates the amount of 4 kinds of meat (chicken, lamb, meat and fish) consumed in a European country from 1979 to 2004. Units are measures in
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per person per week.

Overall
, the consumption of chicken has increased over the time period whereas beef and lamb consumed by Europeans have decline.
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consuming
fish has
also
dropped over the time frame.

Initially
, 150
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of chicken
was consumed
in 1979 which rose to
nearly
250
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grams
by the final years. In terms of fish the consumption was
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just
over 50
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in 1979 and it has
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reduced
to below 50 in 2004.

On contrast to this the consumption of beef and lamb were higher in 1979 and there has been a drop towards the year 2004, where 200
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grams
to
nearly
100
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and 150
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to
nearly
60
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respectively
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IELTS academic Graph showing consumption of fish and meet in 1979 to 2004

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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