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The rendered chart and table illustrates the numbering of total individuals and elderly people of 65 years Or over as well as their proportion respectively from the span 1950 to 2055 in Japan.

The rendered chart and table illustrates the numbering of total individuals and elderly people of 65 years Or over as well as their proportion respectively from the span 1950 to 2055 in Japan. nNW5P
The rendered chart and table illustrates the numbering of total individuals and elderly people of 65 years Or over as well as their proportion respectively from the span 1950 to 2055 in Japan. Overall, culture of Japan is expected to decline by the period 2005 on the other hand, elderly society is expected to increase in the future. Explicitly, it can be seen that in first year society in a million was 84. 1 which moderately increased to 117 million after three decades. Moreover, from the years of 1990 to 2015 populace was same with slightly difference. on the contrary it will start to decline in future and it will be 89. 9 millions in last period. From the further study of given table, in 1950 populace of elderly people of 65 or over was 4. 1 and had proportion of 4. 9% which mushroomed tremendously up to 25. 7 and had percentage about 20. 0% after nearly half century. Furthermore, in future people of elderly citizens will be 37. 2 million in 2035 and after two decades it will decrease by averagely 1 million and will have percentage about 34. 0% and 41% in these years respectively.
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