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The following chart and table show the population and percentage of 65 years aged people or over from 1950 to 2055 in Japan

The following chart and table show the population and percentage of 65 years aged people or over from 1950 to 2055 in Japan pJWj0
The rendered chart and table illustrates the numbering of total individuals and aged people of 65 years Or over as well as their proportion respectively from the year 1950 to 2055 in Japan. Overall, population of Japan is expected to decline by the year 2005 on the other hand, aged population is expected to increase in the future. Explicitly, it can be seen that in first year population in million was 84. 1 which moderately increased to 117 million after three decades. Moreover, from the years of 1990 to 2015 population was same with slightly difference. But it will start to decline in future and it will be 89. 9 millions in last year. From the further study of given table, in 1950 population of aged people of 65 or over was 4. 1 and had proportion of 4. 9% which mushroomed tremendously upto 25. 7 and had percentage about 20. 0% after nearly half century. Furthermore, in future population of aged citizens will be 37. 2 million in 2035 and after two decades it will decrease by averagely 1 million and will have percentage about 34. 0% and 41% in these years respectively.
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1950 to 2055 in Japan.
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IELTS academic The following chart and table show the population and percentage of 65 years aged people or over from 1950 to 2055 in Japan

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