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A chart shows the changes in the total population of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000 and changes in birth and death rates

A chart shows the changes in the total population of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000 and changes in birth and death rates GlAn2

The line graph compares the proportion of death and birth in the overall habitat of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000. Overall, the population of England and Wales showed an upward movement after 1800, while birth and death rate followed an oscillating trend. Acording to the graph, both birth and death trend showed a dramatical increase by 10 millions before a period of stability at 40 000 000 and 38 000 000 respectivly from 1750 to 1800. Following this span, bearth changed to 22 000 000 and death ramained to 20 000 000, after these two figurs declined dramiticaly. In the final 50 years, the death indicator ramained unchanged, but the proportion for bearth had a significant grow to 34 000 000. Based on the death and bearth rate, the population size climbed noticebly to 10 000 000. In contrast the next 50 years it saw a substantial drop about the same point which was at the beginning. But afterwards the figure was a ongoing surge to its maximum value 50 000 00

The line graph compares the proportion of death and birth in the overall
 habitat of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000.

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showed
 an upward movement after 1800, while birth and death rate followed an oscillating trend.

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showed
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 to 34 000 000.

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 ongoing surge to its maximum value 50 000 00