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The line chart illustrates that how much was called through the Local, long Distance and Mobile in Australia per day over the period of 1992-2000. Overall, as is presented in the graph, amount of calls in the local was by far more than to two other kinds of telephone calls including Long distance and mobile in the period mentioned. As far as local calls are concerned, local was phoned approximately 70 million minutes over the 8 years shown. In detail, the time was spent increased steadily from around 70 million minutes in 1992 to a peak just over 80 million minutes in 1996 during one day. Although this trend experienced a decline in the rest of years until 2000. It is conspicuous that, long distances and cell phone had a similar pattern. Both of them witnessed an upward trend until about 30-40 minute in 2000 in Australia daily. However, the figure was dedicated for mobile saw a plunge, long interval had a constant surge between 1992 and 2000. Generally, the cell phone and long distance were undergone a massive change in the period shown but local usage was almost stable.
The line chart illustrates that how much
was called
through the
Local
,
long
Distance
and Mobile in Australia per day over the period of 1992-2000.
Overall
, as
is presented
in the graph, amount of calls in the local

was by far more than to two other kinds of telephone calls including
Long
distance
and mobile in the period mentioned.

As far as
local
calls
are concerned
,
local
was phoned
approximately 70 million minutes over the 8 years shown. In detail, the time
was spent
increased
steadily
from around 70 million minutes in 1992 to a peak
just
over 80 million minutes in 1996 during one day. Although this trend experienced a decline in the rest of years until 2000.

It is conspicuous that,
long
distances
and cell phone had a similar pattern. Both of them witnessed an upward trend until about 30-40
minute
in 2000 in Australia daily.
However
, the figure
was dedicated
for mobile
saw
a plunge,
long
interval had a constant surge between 1992 and 2000.

Generally
, the cell phone and
long
distance
were undergone a massive
change
in the period shown
but
local
usage was almost stable.
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