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Given maps illustrate information on how Frenton changed over 32 years between 1990 and 2012. There is High Street passing through the Frenton from south to north and on both sides of the street there are some public buildings, houses and flats.

Given maps illustrate information on how Frenton changed over 32 years between 1990 and 2012. There is High Street passing through the Frenton from south to north and on both sides of the street there are some public buildings, houses and flats. PVkXg
Given maps illustrate information on how Frenton changed over 32 years between 1990 and 2012. There is High Street passing through the Frenton from south to north and on both sides of the street there are some public buildings, houses and flats. Overall, the town seems to be tremendously transformed over the given time period with the removal of trees, plunged quantity of flats and replacement of old public buildings with some modern ones. It can clearly be observed that the population has experienced a great increase, that seems to be the reason why the previous places of houses and ex-playing fields with trees have been replaced with new blocks of flats. Moreover, there is a new area for flats in the north-east of High Street which is located next to the new Hotel and golf course, built in the previous area of café and park. Unfortunately, the area for trees in south-west of High Street have been used for the construction of a technopark and parallelly on the other side of the same street a new cinema have replaced the theatre and shops have been replaced with a supermarket. Furthermore, hospital seems to have a larger area rather than it had before, and a new restaurant have been built in the place of the bank’s building, but the size of it is a little larger. Interestingly, only school and library occur to be in the same location with the same dimensions.
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Frenton
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changed
over 32 years between 1990 and 2012. There is High
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Street
passing through the
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Frenton
from south to north and on both sides of the
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street
there are
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some
public buildings,
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houses
and
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flats
.
Overall
, the town seems to be
tremendously
transformed over the
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given
time period with the removal of trees, plunged quantity of
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flats
and replacement of
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old
public buildings with
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some
modern ones.

It can
clearly
be observed
that the population has experienced a great increase, that seems to be the reason why the previous places of
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houses
and ex-playing fields with trees have
been replaced
with
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new
blocks of
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flats
.
Moreover
, there is a
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new
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area
for
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flats
in the north-east of High
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Street
which
is located
next
to the
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new
Hotel and golf course, built in the previous
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area
of café and park.

Unfortunately, the
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area
for trees in south-west of High
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Street
have been
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used
for the construction of a
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technopark
and
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parallelly
on the other side of the same
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street
a
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new
cinema have replaced the
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theatre
and shops have
been replaced
with a supermarket.

Furthermore
, hospital seems to have a larger
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area
rather
than it had
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before
, and a
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new
restaurant have
been built
in the place of the bank’s building,
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but
the size of it is a
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little
larger.
Interestingly
,
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only
school and library occur to be in the same location with the same dimensions.
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IELTS academic Given maps illustrate information on how Frenton changed over 32 years between 1990 and 2012. There is High Street passing through the Frenton from south to north and on both sides of the street there are some public buildings, houses and flats.

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