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The given pie charts illustrate the details of amount and various phases of water found in the world and the bar graph represent the percentage of used water for three different kinds of purposes in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada. There are two pie charts representing total world water and total fresh water respectively. From the total percentage of water found in the world only 2. 50% is fresh water and remaining 97. 50% is saline water. From the total fresh water of world which is 2. 50%, the 69. 80% water is stored as frozen water in the form of glaciers and permanent snows. Fresh underground water and fresh renewable water is 29. 90% and 0. 30% respectively and 0. 90% water is stored as underground ice. The percentage of water used in domestic activity was less than 20% in all given countries (Egypt-10%, Saudi Arabia-9% and Canada-19%). In term of industrialization, Egypt had use only 8% of water and Saudi Arabia used 10% more than Egypt did however Canada spent maximum (45%) water. In agriculture, Canada used 30% water and 10% more than that Egypt use 40% of water and again 10% more than that Saudi Arabia use 50% water in mentioned field. Overall, Egypt and Saudi Arabia made maximum use of water in agriculture area whereas Canada spent most amount of water in industry area.
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pie charts illustrate the
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of amount and various phases of
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found in the
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and the bar graph represent the percentage of
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used
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for three
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kinds of purposes in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada.

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and
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fresh
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respectively
. From the
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percentage of
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found in the
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2. 50% is
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and remaining 97. 50% is saline water.

From the
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fresh
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of
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which is 2. 50%, the 69. 80%
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is stored
as frozen
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in the form of glaciers and permanent snows.
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underground
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and
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renewable
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is 29. 90% and 0. 30%
respectively
and 0. 90%
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is stored
as underground ice.

The percentage of
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in domestic activity was less than 20% in all
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countries (Egypt-10%, Saudi Arabia-9% and Canada-19%). In term of industrialization, Egypt had
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8% of
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and Saudi Arabia
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10% more than Egypt did
however
Canada spent maximum (45%) water.

In agriculture, Canada
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30%
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and 10% more than that Egypt
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40% of
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and again 10% more than that Saudi Arabia
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50%
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in mentioned field.

Overall
, Egypt and Saudi Arabia made maximum
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of
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in agriculture area whereas Canada spent most amount of
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in industry area.
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