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The charts below show the percentages of Bangladeshi men and women learning different foreign languages.

The charts below show the percentages of Bangladeshi men and women learning different foreign languages. Wqo3q
The pie chart illustrates the proportion between men and women learning different foreign language in Bangladesh. Overall, it is clear to said that the highest number of men proportion in learning English. Vicevarsa in women learning English was at the pick in Bangladesh. In learning English men and women was recorded with it's pick at 38% and 44% and least at 18% and 6% in Arabic language. men and women in the Bangladesh also learning some proportion of German languages 12% and 14%. which was almost double the amount of learning foreign language by women in Bangladesh. On the other hand, foreign language learning in Bangladesh on rest of it categories, on men learning Arabic and Spanish language was 18% and 19%. which this figure almost 6% and 18% for the women Arabic and Spanish learning languages.
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