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[Forwarded from Stefy Grace Sunny] [ Photo ] The graphs below show the global robotics market during 2000 and 2025 based on sectors. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

[Forwarded from Stefy Grace Sunny] [ Photo ] The graphs below show the global robotics market during 2000 and 2025 based on sectors. 0anLB
The diagram gives an overview of the world robotics market between 2000 and 2025 based on four sectors, namely personal, commercial, industrial and military. Overall, at the beginning of the period each sector contributed the least to the market of world robotics whereas at the end of the period the most significant contributions will be made by all four sectors. The general trend has always been upwards since 2000. Looking at 2000, Industrial sector was contributed 4 billion dollars to world robotics market. This easily outranked military which was the next most contributed sector. In this year, commercial sector was contributed 1 billion dollar while personal sector was contributed nothing. In contrast, moving forward to 2025, the most contribution to global robotics market will be made by industrial sector. On the other hand, personal sector will become the lowest contributed one among the four sectors and its contribution will be staying below 10 billion dollars.
The diagram gives an overview of the world robotics
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of world robotics whereas at the
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Looking at 2000, Industrial
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4 billion dollars to world robotics
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while personal
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, moving forward to 2025, the most contribution to global robotics
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will become the lowest
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IELTS academic [Forwarded from Stefy Grace Sunny] [ Photo ] The graphs below show the global robotics market during 2000 and 2025 based on sectors.

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