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The line graph shows employed workers in the UK between 2008 and 2012.

The line graph shows employed workers in the UK between 2008 and 2012. BLl3d
The line graph shows employed workers in the UK between 2008 and 2012. Overall, the amount of employment in the UK decreased by 0. 4 million people in five years. Firstly, in 2008, the UK had a 25. 4 million employed population. After that, the number of employed workers went down quickly to 24. 8 million people from 2008 to 2009. The number of employed people stayed the same with 24. 8 million workers between 2009 and 2010. Next, there was a steady increase in the number of employed individuals from 24. 8 people to 25 million people in the following two years. At the end of the period between 2011 and 2012, there was no change in employment in the UK.
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workers in the UK between 2008 and 2012.

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in five years.

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, in 2008, the UK had a 25. 4
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population. After that, the number of
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workers went down
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from 2008 to 2009. The number of
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stayed the same with 24. 8
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workers between 2009 and 2010.
Next
, there was a steady increase in the number of
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individuals from 24. 8
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to 25
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in the following two years. At the
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of the period between 2011 and 2012, there was no
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in employment in the UK.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows employed workers in the UK between 2008 and 2012.

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