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These maps show Paradise Island in the past, and it's continuing developments in the present.

These maps show Paradise Island in the past, and it's continuing developments in the present. jDopX

The development of the island called “Paradise” was illustrated by two maps above. In general, it has become extremely modern and more developed than in the past. As we can see, at first, the shape of the island changed. In the past, the area in the northeast was rugged, but now it is rounded. The southwestern cape has become sharper than before. The noticeable difference between the two maps is the servitization on the island. Scientific Research Station was demolished, replaced by the hotel complex. Beside that is a round swimming pool. The Open Restaurant is connected to the hotel complex by a path and there is a BBQ branch next to it. In addition, a cafe has been built on the island. Clearly, all of this has replaced the tree in the past. In the northeast land formed a scenic lookout, allowing the tourist to enjoy the picturesque scenery of the rocks and the sea. The cycle path was constructed around the island. Especially, the west area was extremely renovated. The sea has been zoned for swimming. The old boat was replaced by the cruise ship. Humans repaired and enlarged the pier to serve the tourist activities and ships docked.

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