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Figure about UK Unemployment

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This figure poignantly illustrates how many people work per sector in the UK, in a ten-year period between 2000 and 2010. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there were considerable upward trends in the job rates of the public sector, while the level of employment in the private sector saw a significant fall over the period in question. Another interesting point is that the sector of entrepreneurs had the lowest rate of people who work in 2000, but in 2010, the public sector had a higher rate than the others. Looking at the details, as regards the sector of the self-employed people, the job rate started at roughly nineteen per cent in 2000, then there was a fluctuation over the next three years, then it levelled off at just under twenty per cent until 2005. Then the figure went up substantially, finishing around thirty per cent in 2010. By contrast, the labour input of the private sector went in the opposite direction. The employment rate started at around 48 per cent, and then it fell sharply until 2002. After that, the numbers levelled off between 2002 and 2003. Afterwards, it dropped rigorously in the next seven years.

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