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Fast food consumption in Melbourne between 2005 to 2025

Fast food consumption in Melbourne between 2005 to 2025 1knyA

The table illustrates the rate at which hamburgers, fried Chicken, salad, fried rice and noodles are consumed in Melbourne between 2005 to 2025. Overall, it can be seen that the rate at which fast food were consumed in Melbourne increased over the years, majority preferred hamburger and fried Chicken while fried rice and noodles were least consumption Hamburger stood at 40 on 2005, a slight decrease was experienced in 2021 of 2unit difference whereas, the choice for hamburger will rise to its peak of 51 in 2025. However, fried Chicken rose continuously through the period starting off at 35 and ending it's course with 45. In contrast, salad was the least consumed 5. It rose dramatically triple it's value in 2021 furthermore, there will be a marginal increase to 9times it initial value by 2025. In contrast, the consumption of fried rice and noodles were the least. Similarly, they started off at 6, at present, a slight increase was maintained with a difference of 2 and 3 respectively. It remained stable till 2025 as predicted.

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