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Extraction of avocado oil

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The diagram illustrates the process of producing avocado oil. Overall, extraction of avocado oil involves six major process. Initially, with the help of manual process fruits are checked. And further steps are done by the machines. At the first stage, bunch of avocado is collected and those are dropped on the table for selection. Then rotten fruits are seperated with the help of workers. Next selected avocados are sent for washing. Once washed, avocado is crushed by the blending machine. After that, crushed avocado is transferred in a centrifuge with the temperature of 45 to 50 celcius, which removes solids and liquids and it separates oil and water and then waste water is extracted through pipe from the centrifuge. Meanwhile, seeds and skins from the waste of crushing machine and solid waste from a centrifuge is collected and it was sent to the Orchards by truck. Finally, separated oil is filtered. After filtration, clarified oil is transferred into a dispenser

The diagram illustrates the process of producing avocado oil.

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oil
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checked
. And further
 steps are done
 by the machines.

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sent
 for washing. Once washed, avocado is crushed
 by the blending machine. After that, crushed avocado is transferred
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 through pipe from the centrifuge. Meanwhile, seeds and skins from the waste of crushing machine and solid waste from a centrifuge is collected
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sent
 to the Orchards by truck. Finally
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is filtered
. After filtration, clarified You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
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