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Exporting the products from one place to other place

Exporting the products from one place to other place LGlN6
The given chart categorized the changes in export earnings and percentage variations between the years 2015 and 2016. They provided the information based on the value of one countrys exports. The table contains the deatils regarding the percentage change in values from 2015 - 2016. Petroleum Products which have relatively high exports earnigs when compared to other items. In 2015, 60 billion earings were made but in 2016 earning levels got raised upto 3% more. Engineered goods had gained 8. 5% high earnigs. Where in 2015 earings are around 55billions and in 2016 earnings are about 61 billions. comming to Gems and jewellery earnings in it were fall down to 5. 18% in 2015 value is of 45billions but in it 2016 it decreased to 40billions. There is no drastic changes in Agriculture Products as it gained percantage of 0. 81%. The level earnings are almost equal(30billions). finally Textiles purchasing rate of the products are very low when compared to other items. Although people are showing some intrest in buying these Textiles. so, the percentage level got increased- tremendiously from 2015 to 2015. Textiles itself gained high percentage change in values. so we can conclude this by petroleum products gained more values by exporting these prodcuts and the Textilies prodcuts earnigs are less but have high percentage change in value as pepole are strated showing intrest in buying these products.
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chart categorized the
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in export
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earnings
and
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percentage
variations between the years 2015 and 2016. They provided the
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information


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based
on the
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value
of one
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countrys
exports. The table contains the
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deatils
regarding the
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percentage
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change
in values
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from 2015 - 2016
.

Petroleum
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Products
which have
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high exports
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earnigs
when compared to other items. In 2015, 60 billion
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earings
were made
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in 2016
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earning
levels
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got
raised
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upto
3% more. Engineered
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goods
had
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gained
8. 5% high
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earnigs
. Where in 2015
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earings
are around 55billions
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and


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in
2016
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earnings
are about 61 billions.

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comming
to Gems and
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jewellery
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earnings
in it
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were
fall down to 5. 18% in 2015
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is of 45billions
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in it 2016 it decreased to 40billions.

There is no drastic
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changes
in Agriculture
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Products
as it
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gained
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percantage
of 0. 81%. The level
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earnings
are almost equal(30billions).

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finally
Textiles purchasing rate of the
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are
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low when compared to other items.
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people
are showing
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some
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intrest
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these


Textiles.
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, the
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level
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increased-
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tremendiously
from 2015 to 2015. Textiles itself
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high
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in values.

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we can conclude this by petroleum
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products
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gained
more values by exporting these
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prodcuts
and the
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Textilies
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prodcuts
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earnigs
are less
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have high

percentage
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change
in
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as
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pepole
are
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strated
showing
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intrest
in buying these
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products
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IELTS academic Exporting the products from one place to other place

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