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The two maps show the changes in the university from 1985 to present

The two maps show the changes in the university from 1985 to present mL2Gq
The pictorial representations illustrate the changes that has incorporated in the layout of university over the period of 36 years. Overall, it is evident that the layout of university has undergone significant modifications with the inclusion of certain sophisticated amenities and leading to complete refurbishment. Although, the area remains same over the span, yet many things has been added to its functionality and has become more crowded and modernized than before. Accordingly, in 1985, library was on the corner of north-west but after 36 years IT centre add in the library, so its extend than old library. Interestingly, science zone develop in the top of this building. Noticeably, physics block and chemistry block was presented in the left side of library in 1985, yet now it is replace by science laboratories. Shifting attention towards the remaining information, in 1985, car park area was in east side while today it is interchange by lecture theatre. Surprisingly, in the front part biology block was presented in 1985, however it is removed and in this place plants is planted. Shockingly, in 1985, car parking area in south-west side which is replaced by shuttle bus terminal in now-a-days. However, admin building was left side of car parking area in 1985, while today it is reduce and some plants are growing in their both sides. Lastly, road was placed in the centre of car park and admin building which is removed and footpath is constructed.
The pictorial representations illustrate the
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changes
that has incorporated in the layout of university over the period of 36 years.
Overall
, it is evident that the layout of university has undergone significant modifications with the inclusion of certain sophisticated amenities and leading to complete refurbishment. Although, the
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area
remains same over the span,
yet
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many
things has been
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added
to its functionality and has become more crowded and modernized than
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before
.
Accordingly
, in 1985, library was on the corner of north-west
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but
after 36 years IT
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centre
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add
in the library,
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so
its extend than
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old
library.
Interestingly
, science zone develop in the top of this building.
Noticeably
, physics block and chemistry block
was presented
in the
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left
side of library in 1985,
yet
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now
it is
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replace
by science laboratories. Shifting attention towards the remaining information, in 1985,
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car
park
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area
was in east side while
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today
it is interchange by lecture
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theatre
.
Surprisingly
, in the front part biology block
was presented
in 1985,
however
it
is removed
and in this place plants
is planted
.
Shockingly
, in 1985,
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car
parking
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area
in south-west side which
is replaced
by shuttle bus terminal in
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now
-a-days.
However
, admin building was
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left
side of
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car
parking
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area
in 1985, while
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today
it is
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reduce
and
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some
plants are growing in their both
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sides
.
Lastly
, road
was placed
in the
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centre
of
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car
park and admin building which
is removed
and footpath
is constructed
.
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