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The given diagram illustrates the production the energy using wind and how it is transported to the consumer.

The given diagram illustrates the production the energy using wind and how it is transported to the consumer. 7WrO2
The given diagram illustrates the production the energy using wind and how it is transported to the consumer. Overall, the creation of electricity consists of five major steps starting from finding a suitable location to plant the windmills to transporting it to the customer through gridlines. First, suitable location is found to setup the windmills in which a rotor and three blades are fixed. As wind blows, the blades and rotor start to turn. Due to this action, the generator begins to spin, which as a result brings about an electrical output. These outputs account to about 700 volts which are usually sent through a transformer that converts the raw electrical output into useable form of energy that amounts to 38, 000 volts. In the absence of wind, the electrical output is stored in batteries. After the conversion, electricity is sent through high tension lines to the consumers for domestic and other purposes.
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diagram illustrates the production the energy using wind and how it
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, the creation of electricity consists of five major steps starting from finding a suitable location to plant the windmills to transporting it to the customer through
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gridlines
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First
, suitable location
is found
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to setup
the windmills in which a rotor and three blades are
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fixed
. As wind blows, the blades and rotor
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start
to turn. Due to this action, the generator
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begins
to spin, which
as a result
brings about an electrical
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output
. These
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outputs
account to about 700 volts which are
usually
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sent
through a transformer that converts the raw electrical
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output
into useable form of energy that amounts to 38, 000 volts. In the absence of wind, the electrical
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output
is stored
in batteries. After the conversion, electricity is
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sent
through high tension lines to the consumers for domestic and other purposes.
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IELTS academic The given diagram illustrates the production the energy using wind and how it is transported to the consumer.

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3 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
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