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The diagram illustrates the procedure of how to recycle worn-out glass bottles.

The diagram illustrates the procedure of how to recycle worn-out glass bottles. kbeRK
The diagram illustrates the procedure of how to recycle worn-out glass bottles. Overall, it can be observed that there are three types of stages that process of wasted bottles and ending with the delivery the new form bottles. First, wasted glass bottles are picked and put into the collection point and then these bottles will be transferred where they are placed into high pressure water to wash out drit. Next, the bottles will be separately categorized by their coloors. In subsequent, the bottles are delivered to a glass factory where they will be smashed into small pieces. Then, following the process they will be puted into a burning furnace with temperatures between 600C-800C and then liquid is produced. After that, recycled liquid glass will be shaped in glass mould. Finally, new bottles are filled with products ready for sale and delivered to the supermarkets.
The diagram illustrates the procedure of how to recycle worn-out
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glass
bottles.

Overall
, it can
be observed
that there are three types of stages that process of wasted
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bottles
and ending with the delivery the new form bottles.

First
, wasted
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glass
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bottles
are picked
and put into the collection point and then these
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bottles
will
be transferred
where they
are placed
into high pressure water to wash out
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drit
.
Next
, the
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bottles
will be
separately
categorized by their
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coloors
.

In subsequent, the
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bottles
are delivered
to a
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glass
factory where they will
be smashed
into
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small
pieces. Then, following the process they will be
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puted
into a burning furnace with temperatures between 600C-800C and then liquid
is produced
. After that, recycled liquid
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glass
will
be shaped
in
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glass
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mould
.
Finally
, new
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bottles
are filled
with products ready for sale and delivered to the supermarkets.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the procedure of how to recycle worn-out glass bottles.

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