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As you can see below, there is a chart illustrates the raise on people’s migration to the capital city of a particular country, between 2000 and 2015. This survey mentions the prime reasons of this movement which we will explain in the next two paragraphs. After 2000, governments commenced to build big universities in the capitals. Hens, movement to these cities for study purposes was increased until 2000. From 2010, a significant sharp ascend rate can be shown due to education targets. Another obvious reason forced people to move to capitals was for family and friends due to the fact that most facilities had been concentrated on these cities. Also, adventure was a logical aim but not as much as another cases. On the contrary, employment had an adverse effect on people’s migration which the sharp decrease from 2010 to 2015 shown in this chart prove this fact that. To sum up, we have reported several reasons which explain the increase on people’s movement to capital cities based on the surveys and investigations, between 2000 and 2015.

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