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explain diagram shows to How the water cycle works to generate electricity

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The diagram illustrates how the water is converted from liquid to vapor and vice-versa. Overall, the water from water bodies, plants get transformed into vapor in the presence of sunlight. The vapor accumulates to form clouds that cause rain. The rain water is carried to those initial points again where it is vaporised to repeat the cycle. The cycle starts with water being vapourised under sunlight from the water bodies. The wind facilitates vapours to form clouds. These undergo more cooling due to condensation and causes rain. The rain water gets stored as underground water that passes through porous rocks and also in the lakes. From these, the water passes into the sea with the help of downstream and the cycle repeats there. On the other hand, plants and trees perform transpiration to convert water from their surfaces into vapor in the sun. The vapor from this also undergoes same process as that of the vapor from water bodies to originate rain. The wastes from the factories also contribute in formation of rain by going down into the sea.
The diagram illustrates how the
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vapor
and vice-versa.
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, the
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from
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water
bodies, plants
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get
transformed into
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vapor
in the presence of sunlight. The
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vapor
accumulates to form clouds that cause
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rain
. The
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rain
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water
is carried
to those initial points again where it is
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vaporised
to repeat the cycle.

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cycle
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starts
with
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being
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vapourised
under sunlight from the
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bodies.
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The
wind facilitates
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vapours
to form clouds. These undergo more cooling due to condensation and causes
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rain
. The
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rain
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water
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gets
stored as underground
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water
that passes through porous rocks and
also
in the lakes. From these, the
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water
passes into the sea with the
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help
of downstream and the cycle repeats there.

On the other hand
, plants and trees perform transpiration to convert
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water
from their surfaces into
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vapor
in the sun. The
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vapor
from this
also
undergoes same process as that of the
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vapor
from
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water
bodies to originate
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rain
. The wastes from the factories
also
contribute in formation of
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rain
by going down into the sea.
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IELTS academic explain diagram shows to How the water cycle works to generate electricity

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179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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