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The data provided in form of bar graph depicts different methods used by children between age group of 5-12, to go to and and return from school, during 1990 and 2010. Overall, in new age children made more trips in car, while in old period majority of children were aligned to walking. in detail, the children of new period seems to make their journey more comfortable by travling from motor viechles, in 1990, 4 million of children were traveling from cars. this figure increased in 2010, the usage of cars for school in signifincantly rose to over 10 million. there is another striking differnence in walking, As over 12 millions trips were made by walking per year in 1990. however, it reduce by the d amount of 6%. cyling held number of 6 million and conversly, 2 million in 2010. clearly, this amount also hit a low. the trip by per year by in sector walking ans bus existed as, just less than 6 million throughout 1990 and appoximately 3 million in 2010. the insiginificant dissimilarity driven from bus, children who travelled from bus were more 6 miilion in 1990 and over 4 million by the year of 2010
The data provided in form of bar graph depicts
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children
between age group of 5-12, to go to
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return from school, during 1990 and 2010.
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, in new age
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made more trips in car, while in
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period

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majority
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were aligned
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in
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children
of new period seems to
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their journey more comfortable by
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travling
from motor
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, in 1990, 4
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of
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children
were traveling from cars.
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this
figure increased in 2010, the usage of cars for school in
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signifincantly
rose to over 10
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.
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there
is another striking
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differnence
in walking, As over 12
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were made
by walking per year in 1990.
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, it
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cyling
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million
and
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conversly
, 2
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million
in 2010.
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the
trip by per year by in sector walking ans bus existed as,
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less than 6
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million
throughout 1990 and
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3
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million
in 2010.

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the
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  American English
4 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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