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These graphs show the age-groups at which men and women got married in 1996 and 2008

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The information about the data of marriage in male and female which is represented by the vertical bar graph over the Span of twelve years starting from 1996. The data has been calibrated in percentage. To begin with, it is clear show in the chart, in both years the age of 25-29 male was top of the list, it accountd for above one in ten. Whereas, the age of 39-45 women was second highest in both years, it was around nearly 15%. in addition, the lowest percentage of age of 16-19 and 20-24 in both genders it representd around 2%. Overall, it can be vivedly seem that in both genders in 1996, most of the male are interested in merrage while in 2008 female was most interested in merrage
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is represented
by the vertical bar graph over the Span of twelve years starting from 1996. The data has
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IELTS academic These graphs show the age-groups at which men and women got married in 1996 and 2008

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