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Evolution of cutting tool

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Writing task I DATE PAGE NO 120 This Diagram Indicate the evolution of cutting tool in the stone age first shows that it was Imade 1. 4 Million ago and other one is showing it was made 800 thousand year ago. In first picture, the stone have much Blunt edges mot so and they did not cut tools in Proper But when they evaluate, the feature of stones had been Increasing. Then they did great work as a cutting tool In first picture, they had so many whadges and Rough Surface but when they the development occur, they has sharp edges also the length of stene is also inc

Writing task I

DATE PAGE NO 120

The verb 'Indicate' is plural. Did you mean: "This Diagram indicates"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?This Diagram indicates
This Diagram Indicate
 the evolution of cutting tool in the If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Stone Age
stone age
first
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 that it was Possible spelling mistake found.MadeImageI made
Imade
 1. 4 Million ago and other one is showing it was made
 800 thousand year ago.

In first
 picture, the stone have much Blunt edges mot Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).so, and
so and
 they did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 tools in Proper This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 when they evaluate, the feature of stones had been Increasing. Then they did great work as a cutting Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphtool.tool!tool?tool:tool,tool;
tool


In first
 picture, they had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
Possible spelling mistake found.wadges
whadges
 and Rough Surface This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 when they the development occur, they The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "have", "haven"havehaven
has
 sharp edges also
 the length of Possible spelling mistake found.scenestoneSteveStonestentSterne
stene
 is also
 inc