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Even though Globalization affects the world’s economics in a very positive way, its negative sides should not be forgotten. Discuss.

This is a bar chart of the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods. In 1970 most of men were studying part-time but from 1980, studying part-time was decreased and studying full-time was increased and in 1990, it was twice as many students as in 1970. on the other hands, women studying full time were increased and not only full time, part time also were increased in 1990. studying full time was three times as many students as in 1970. If compare Men and Women, as you see in 1970 men were studying more than women full time or part time but it changed from 1980 and then in 1990 women were studying part time more than men and studying full time was same numberIt shows you women has a high education now
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IELTS academic Even though Globalization affects the world’s economics in a very positive way, its negative sides should not be forgotten. Discuss.

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