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the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The above given chart visualizes the outcomes of a question of how often do people buy and drink different types of coffee in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart of Australia. The first option is fresh coffee in last four weeks, Sydney has around 43. 7 percent of city residents and is almost same as Melbourne which stands at 42. 2 percent. Brisbane and Adelaide have nearly the equal proportion, 34. 2 percent and 34. 4 percent. Next, Hobart has 38. 3 percent. The second line is bought instant coffee in last four weeks. Brisbane has 52. 6 percent, cities that have almost the same proportion are Adelaide, 49. 8 percent and Melbourne 48. 7 percent. The lowest percentage is 45. 5 percent which is of Sydney and the highest proportion is 54. 9 percent which is of Hobart. The last option of the survey shows the percentage of city residents that went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last four weeks. In Sydney, people that went to a cafe for a coffee or a tea in the last weeks 61 percent of city residents. In Brisbane, citizens went to a cafe for a coffee or a tea in last 4 weeks 55. 4 percent. The lowest proportion is held by Adelaide which is 49. 9 percent of city residents. In Hobart, people went to a cafe for a coffee or a tea in last 4 weeks is 62. 7 percent. The highest is Melbourne that display 63. 6 percent. In conclusion, the highest number of the survey is the percentage of city residents that went to a cafe for a coffee or a tea in last four weeks because it shows almost the highest proportion in three types.
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in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart of Australia. The
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, Sydney has around 43. 7
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and is almost same as Melbourne which stands at 42. 2
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, 34. 2
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and 34. 4
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. Brisbane has 52. 6
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,
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are Adelaide, 49. 8
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and Melbourne 48. 7
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. The lowest percentage is 45. 5
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which is of Sydney and the highest
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is 54. 9
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which is of Hobart. The last option of the survey
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in last four
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61
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in last 4
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55. 4
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is 62. 7
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In conclusion
, the highest number of the survey is the percentage of city
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in last four
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almost the highest
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in three types.

IELTS academic the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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