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EU exports profile changes from 2000 to 2010

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The pie chart depicts the change in exports and contribution from various EU countries to India and China in 2000 and 2011. Overall the exports profile hasn't changed much in the decade 2000-2011 which shows a good and constant pace trading in both the countries. In 2000 most of the exports to India from European union is contributed by United Kingdom and Belgium with 29% and 25% respectively. Both the countries shares more than 50 percent of the net EU exports. By 2011, there is a huge drop of 16% in trade with UK and a drastic rise in exports by Germany and became the highest exporting country from the European Union. Whereas in China, Germany leads with more than one third of the EU exports. The exports further rose to almost 50 percent of EU exports by 2011. The chinese trade with EU has been very steady that there are no significant changes in the pie profile. In 2000, both India and China had very different holds from various countries, whereas by 2011 both the countries have very similar percentages in exports trade with Europe countries.
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to India and China in 2000 and 2011.
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and constant pace trading in both the countries.

In 2000 most of the
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to India from
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shares more than 50 percent of the net EU
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. By 2011, there is a huge drop of 16% in trade with UK and a drastic rise in
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by Germany and became the highest exporting
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from the European Union.

Whereas in China, Germany leads with more than one third of the EU
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rose to almost 50 percent of EU
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by 2011. The
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steady that there are no significant
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similar percentages in
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trade with Europe
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