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Ocean pollutant pie chart

Ocean pollutant pie chart WYXRD

The two pie charts illustrate different pollutants entering the ocean at aparticular point in the years 1997 and 2007. Overall, there was decrease in almost all the sources of pollutants at the end of time period compared to the beginning adecade earlier with only one recording an increase percentage wise. The pollutants that recorded an increase in percentage was offshore oil by additional 9 percent at the end than 1997 which was at 5% and sewage domestic pollution from 18% in 1997 to nearly a third of waste ten years later. A downward trend observed in marine to 17% in 2007 from 22% in 1997, insignificant fall by 1% in air pollutants between 1997 and 2007, again litter that contributed 4% in the beginning was eliminated at the end while farm and industrial wastes both dropped by half between the years.

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pollutants
 entering the ocean at Possible spelling mistake found.particulara particular
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 point in the years 1997 and 2007.

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, there was decrease in almost all the sources of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoxic wastetoxinpoisonpollution
pollutants
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of time period compared to the beginning Possible spelling mistake found.decadea decade
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 earlier with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one recording an increase percentage wise.

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pollutants
 that recorded an increase in percentage was offshore oil by additional 9 percent at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 than 1997 which was at 5% and sewage domestic pollution from 18% in 1997 to nearly
 a third of waste ten years later.

A downward trend observed in marine to 17% in 2007 from 22% in 1997, insignificant fall by 1% in air You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoxic wastetoxinpoisonpollution
pollutants
 between 1997 and 2007, again litter that contributed 4% in the beginning was eliminated
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 while farm and industrial wastes both dropped by half between the years. 