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the diagrams illustrate the design of a single and double room study area

the diagrams illustrate the design of a single and double room study area 9rKXw
The diagrams compare the layout of a single and double room with study facilities It is clear that, although double room costs more money it has more windows, cupboards, beds, and study desks than single room. The single room just costs 200$ whereas the double room is more expensive, which costs 350$ per week. Both room have them same width (6m) but the length of the single room is shorter than that of double room ( 2. 5m compares to 4m). Single room has two bookshelf between bathroom and kitchen while outside the kitchen of double room has a circle table. And a bookshelf of the double room was located next to the bathroom. The kitchen of both rooms have stoves, sink, and microwave. There are 2 beds next to 2 windows in the double room compare to one bed in single room In the middle of the room, there is only one cupboard in single room while in the double room there is a wall with 2 cupboards, a television and a bookshelf. The TV of single room is positioned outside the wall and there is one study desk near the bathroom compares to 2 study desks next to 2 beds of the double room.
The diagrams
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compare
the layout of a
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single
and
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double
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room
with
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study
facilities

It is
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clear
that, although
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double
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room
costs more money it has more windows, cupboards,
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beds
, and
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study
desks than
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single
room.

The
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single
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room
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just
costs
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200$
whereas the
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double
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room
is more expensive, which costs
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350$
per week. Both
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room
have them same width (
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6m
)
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but
the length of the
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single
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room
is shorter than that of
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double
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room
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(
2.
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5m
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compares
to
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4m
).

Single
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room
has two
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bookshelf
between bathroom and kitchen while outside the kitchen of
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double
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room
has a circle table. And a bookshelf of the
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double
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room
was located
next
to the bathroom. The kitchen of both
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rooms
have stoves, sink, and microwave. There are 2
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beds
next
to 2 windows in the
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double
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room
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compare
to one
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bed
in
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single
room

In the middle of the
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room
, there is
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only
one cupboard in
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single
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room
while in the
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double
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room
there is a wall with 2 cupboards, a television and a bookshelf. The TV of
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single
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room
is positioned
outside the wall and there is one
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study
desk near the bathroom
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compares
to 2
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study
desks
next
to 2
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beds
of the
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double
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room
.

IELTS academic the diagrams illustrate the design of a single and double room study area

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