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The export summary of different products and also their percethgage change in dieferent years

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The charts below show a comparison of export earnings in terms of value and percentage change of different products in 2015 and 2016. In 2015 the maximum earning were from export of petroleum products and decreased by 3% in 2016. The engineered goods showed a significant increase by 8. 5% in their earnings through export. Coming to earnings from gems and jewellery sector it got decreased by 5. 18% from 2015 to 2016. We can observe a slight increase of 0. 81% in contribution to the export earning through agricultural products. The textiles industry shows a significant contribution in earning value from exports in 2016 as compared to 2015 as it got increased by 15. 24% in 2016. Gems and jewellery is the only industry that has earned less value through export in 2016 as compared to the previous year. Overall we can observe that petroleum products and engineered products plays a major role in earning revenue from exports and also has shown significant increase in their earnings in next year from the previous year.
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in 2015 and 2016. In 2015 the maximum
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decreased by 5. 18% from 2015 to 2016.

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IELTS academic The export summary of different products and also their percethgage change in dieferent years

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