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Essay topics: The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012

Essay topics: The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012 AjgMX

The bar chart illustrates about the number of foreign and home students who studied computer science in the UK university from 2010 to 2012. Overall, it is clear that british scholars showed more interest in that subject, while international pupils gave less priority to study in such university in three given years. It is evident from the bar chart that, home country's men learner counts was 40, but females number was less than 10 from males figure and about to 30 in the begining of the time period. That, men scholars number was went up to above 45 despite, women number was just declined to below 25 in 2011. Boys and girls number were rose up and reached to 45 in the end of the given period. Moving towards to foreigner who studied in that university, this figure showed 20 males and 15 females in 2010. However, counts of international students were increased by 5 and accounted to 25 boys and 20 girls in the middle of throughout period. The number of men foreign pupils was reached to 40 yet women count was stabled at 20 in 2012.

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