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The graph shows the enrolments of overseas and local students in australian universities over ten year period, by taking the unit as count of students. On the whole, there is considerable increase in the enrolment of students from the year 2001 to 2010 in both overseas students and local students. it is also observed that count of students who opted for the commencing enrolments also increased. However, local students were less likely to prefer the commencing enrolments. Considering overseas students, enrolments for total course has a drastic increase, it almost increased 60 percent respectively and hit a peak in 2010. The commencing enrolments also increased to 4000 besides the fact that students choose total enrolments more than commencing enrolments. local students have dramatically more number of total course enrolments than the overseas student enrolments and also the commencing enrolments are a way higher number than overseas students total enrolments, despite the fact that the commencing enrolments are stagnated and were low in the years 2003 to 2006 and a slight diclination till 2010.
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australian
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ten year
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from the year 2001 to 2010 in both
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observed that count of
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, local
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students
were less likely to prefer the
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enrolments
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for
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total
course has a drastic increase, it almost increased 60 percent
respectively
and hit a peak in 2010. The
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commencing
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also
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local
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enrolments
than the
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commencing
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are a way higher number than
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, despite the fact that the
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commencing
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are stagnated
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diclination
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