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Honey manufacturing in 6 different States

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The rendered diagram is a Statistical presentation which delineate how much honey Produced in millions of Pounds and the numbers of honey manufacturing colonies in five us states in the year 2006. Overall, North Dakota had come at the top of the list as the higher honey producing States as well as largest honey collecting colonies. Meanwhile, Wisconsin was the lowest honey producer area and had the least amount of bees colonies among all five States. It is Conspicuous that North Dakota has the highest bees colonies in year 2006 which was amounted for 350 thousands. Afterwards Approximately 220 thousands honey collected by South Dakota and there was the second highest amount in diagram. It is apparently seen that proportion for honey collecting colonies in Montana and Minnesota to stay constant in 2006 it was around 130 thousands. Wisconsin had to hit the lowest point for collecting bees colonies just over 50 thousand. It is explicitly observed that there was a surge in number of honey production for North Dakota there was over 25 million of pounds. Subsequently, South Dakota and Montana was remained relatively stable for honey manufacturing roughly 10 millions of pounds. There was a drastic difference between Minnesota and Montana it was only 1 million less than Montana. Interestingly, honey collection in Wisconsin a fall in 2006, it was a half amount compared to Minnesota, Wisconsin was the lowest honey producer area and had the least amount of bees colonies among all five States. It is Conspicuous that North Dakota has the highest bees colonies in year 2006 which was amounted for 350 thousands. Afterwards Approximately 220 thousands honey collected by South Dakota and there was the second highest amount in diagram. It is apparently seen that proportion for honey collecting colonies in Montana and Minnesota to stay constant in 2006 it was around 130 thousands. Wisconsin had to hit the lowest point for collecting bees colonies just over 50 thousand. It is explicitly observed that there was a surge in number of honey production for North Dakota there was over 25 million of pounds. Subsequently, South Dakota and Montana was remained relatively stable for honey manufacturing roughly 10 millions of pounds. There was a drastic difference between Minnesota and Montana it was only 1 million less than Montana. Interestingly, honey collection in Wisconsin a fall in 2006, it was a half amount compared to Minnesota
The rendered diagram is a Statistical presentation which delineate how much honey Produced in
millions
of Pounds and the numbers of honey manufacturing
colonies
in five us
states
in the year 2006.

Overall
,
North
Dakota had
come
at the top of the list as the higher honey producing
States
as well
as largest honey
collecting
colonies
. Meanwhile, Wisconsin was the
lowest
honey producer area and had the least
amount
of bees
colonies
among all five
States
. It is Conspicuous that
North
Dakota has the highest bees
colonies
in year 2006 which
was amounted
for 350 thousands. Afterwards Approximately 220 thousands honey collected by South Dakota and there was the second highest
amount
in diagram. It is
apparently
seen
that proportion for honey
collecting
colonies
in Montana and Minnesota to stay constant in 2006 it was around 130 thousands. Wisconsin had to hit the
lowest
point for
collecting
bees
colonies
just
over
50 thousand.

It is
explicitly
observed that there was a surge in number of honey production for
North
Dakota there was
over
25
million
of pounds.
Subsequently
, South Dakota and Montana
was remained
relatively
stable for honey manufacturing roughly 10
millions
of pounds. There was a drastic difference between Minnesota and Montana it was
only
1
million
less than Montana.
Interestingly
, honey collection in Wisconsin a fall in 2006, it was a half
amount
compared to Minnesota, Wisconsin was the
lowest
honey producer area and had the least
amount
of bees
colonies
among all five
States
. It is Conspicuous that
North
Dakota has the highest bees
colonies
in year 2006 which
was amounted
for 350 thousands. Afterwards Approximately 220 thousands honey collected by South Dakota and there was the second highest
amount
in diagram.

It is
apparently
seen
that proportion for honey
collecting
colonies
in Montana and Minnesota to stay constant in 2006 it was around 130 thousands. Wisconsin had to hit the
lowest
point for
collecting
bees
colonies
just
over
50 thousand. It is
explicitly
observed that there was a surge in number of honey production for
North
Dakota there was
over
25
million
of pounds.
Subsequently
, South Dakota and Montana
was remained
relatively
stable for honey manufacturing roughly 10
millions
of pounds. There was a drastic difference between Minnesota and Montana it was
only
1
million
less than Montana.
Interestingly
, honey collection in Wisconsin a fall in 2006, it was a half
amount
compared to Minnesota
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IELTS academic Honey manufacturing in 6 different States

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