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Electricity usage in England

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The given line diagram provides information about the usage of electricity in England during winter and summer. The price charts show the what is the usage of electricity. In an overview, the high proof electricity is used during winter while compared to the usage of electricity in summer. It was very minimal than the usage during winter. As per the line graph, the usage of electricity during winter was approximately 35000 units. In the beginning hours, the consumption dropped to around 30000 units till in the first five hours. At the end of the day, the demand of electricity rose drastically above 40000 units.
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usage
of
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electricity
in England during winter and summer. The price charts
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show
the what is the
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usage
of
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electricity
. In an overview, the high proof
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electricity
is
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used
during winter while compared to the
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usage
of
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electricity
in summer. It was
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very
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minimal
than the
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usage
during winter.

As per the line graph, the
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usage
of
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electricity
during winter was approximately 35000 units. In the beginning hours, the consumption dropped to around 30000 units till in the
first
five hours. At the
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end
of the day, the demand of
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electricity
rose
drastically
above 40000 units.

IELTS academic Electricity usage in England

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