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the amount of money in millions of dollars) that people in four different age groups from Seoul South Korea stand on going through as a cinema, restaurants and music concert in 2014

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The bar chart illustrates how many dollars that the diferent age from Seoul, Korea, put money into going to the cinema, restaurants, and music concerts in 2014. Overall, restaurants were the most popular entertainment with people in the age of 40-55, while music concerts did not be well-liked with people age 56-80. Regarding restaurants, the amount of money that people in the age of 40-50 spent on this category stood at 22 milions dollars, which remarkably higher than people age 18-25, at 14 milions dollars. It was also higher than people age 26-39 and 40-55, who spent 16 to 17 milions dollars. With regard to cinema, there was a slight variation in the interest in the cinema between the ages, about 9 to 13 milions dollars. However, in terms of music concerts had a considerable redution among the ages. Spending on music concerts was the highest category in people age 18-25, at 14 milions dollars. It then fell substantialy with people age 56-80, who spent about 8 milions dollars for this activity.

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