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Table graph has information about employment rate and average salary

Table graph has information about employment rate and average salary Bweaj

The given table elucidates the employment rates and the average yearly salaries of fresh degree holders of an Australian University in 2009. It is clear from the graph that the science graduates had the lowest employment rates (62%) and the lowest average salaries ($ 39, 000) in 2009. 93% of the health graduates were employed and received and average annual salary of $42, 000. Law and Engineering and IT graduates received the highest salaries of $59, 000 dollars each. It is interesting to note that their employment rate was lesser than that of Health graduates but their average salaries were higher. 78% of those graduating from the business field got employment and their average salaries per year were $ 52, 000. 72% of those holding a bachelors degree in Arts and Social Science were employed and their average annual salaries were $ 50, 000. Overall, the least paid jobs were in Health and Science, whereas Law and IT and Engineering graduates were the best paid.

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