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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. roaN
The line graphs compare the number of overseas students to local tudents at the universities in Australia from 2001 to 2010. Overall, Australian universities were dominated by the local students. However, by looking at the charts, both figures had similarity trends. The total enrolments of international and Australia students increased dramatically over the period shown, but the total of local students remained stable in the end of periods. By looking at the commencing line of the first graph, it can be seen that the number of overseas students started by over 15, 000 in 2001 and peaked in 2010 by almost 41, 000. This figure was only about five percents of the total domestic students. On the other hand, as a majority community in the local universities, the total enrolments of local students were began by 400, 000 in 2001 and reached to over by 600, 000 in 2006. The figure remained stable in the next consecutive years until 2010.
The line graphs compare the number of overseas
students
to
local
tudents
at the universities in Australia from 2001 to 2010.

Overall
, Australian universities
were dominated
by the
local
students
.
However
, by looking at the charts, both figures had similarity trends. The
total
enrolments
of international and Australia
students
increased
dramatically
over the period shown,
but
the
total
of
local
students
remained stable in the
end
of periods.

By looking at the commencing line of the
first
graph, it can be
seen
that the number of overseas
students
started
by over 15, 000 in 2001 and peaked in 2010 by almost 41, 000. This figure was
only
about five percents of the
total
domestic students.

On the other hand
, as a majority community in the
local
universities, the
total
enrolments
of
local
students
were
began
by 400, 000 in 2001 and reached to over by 600, 000 in 2006. The figure remained stable in the
next
consecutive years until 2010.
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