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The chart graph illustrates the number of incidents crime in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012

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The chart graph illustrates the number of incidents crime in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012 In 2003, the number of burglary in the inner city was highest, at nearly 3500 incidents, while the figure for car theft was slightly lower, at less than 3000 incidents. There were more than 500 incidents stolening robbery. In 2012, the quantity of robbery and car theft rate unchanged to less than 500 incidents and just over 3500 incidents respectively and remained steady. At the same time, the figure for burglary steals rapidly decreased to only less than 1500 incidents. The number of robbery was by far lower during the research period. Additionally, while burglary and car theft stolen figure remained unchanged from 2003 to 2012
The chart graph illustrates the number of
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crime in Newport city
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from 2003 to 2012

In 2003, the number of burglary in the inner city was highest, at
nearly
3500
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, while the figure for car theft was
slightly
lower, at less than 3000
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incidents
. There were more than 500
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incidents
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stolening
robbery.

In 2012, the quantity of robbery and car theft rate unchanged to less than 500
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and
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over 3500
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respectively
and remained steady. At the same time, the figure for burglary steals
rapidly
decreased to
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less than 1500 incidents.

The number of robbery was by far lower during the research period.
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, while burglary and car theft stolen figure remained unchanged from 2003 to 2012
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IELTS academic The chart graph illustrates the number of incidents crime in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012

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