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The diagram shows how solar works

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The diagram illustrates how the solar energy is generated from sun. To begin with, the sunlight coming from the sun hits the solar panels and that is connected with 12v battery and this is charged up or power up by solar panels. Continuing the process 12 volt battery js connected with household electrical appliances. Some equipments requires only twelve volts of electricity appliances like cooler, cellphones, spotlight and fan. They are power-up by this battery directly. On the pthet hand, this battery is joined with an inverter, it is mainly used for increasing and balancing the supply of voltage. Inverter provides higher voltage to run the appliances which requires current upto 240v. Equipments such as sump pump, laptop, fluorescent lighting and television. Overall, this is how solar works to power-up households appliances with high voltage and low voltage. It is an endless or cyclic process.
The diagram illustrates how the
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solar
energy
is generated
from sun. To
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begin
with, the sunlight coming from the sun hits the
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solar
panels and that
is connected
with 12v battery and this
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up or power up by
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solar
panels. Continuing the process 12 volt battery
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connected with household electrical
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appliances
.
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Some
equipments
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requires
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only
twelve volts of electricity
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appliances
like cooler, cellphones, spotlight and fan. They are power-up by this battery
directly
. On the
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hand, this battery is
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joined
with an inverter, it is
mainly
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used
for increasing and balancing the supply of
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voltage
. Inverter provides higher
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voltage
to run the
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appliances
which requires
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current
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upto
240v. Equipments such as sump pump, laptop, fluorescent lighting and television.
Overall
, this is how
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solar
works to power-up households
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appliances
with high
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voltage
and low
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voltage
. It is an endless or cyclic process.
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