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How patients evoluated health centre

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The table demonstrates evaluations of patients for booking appointment, doctor’s service, care of children, pharmacy, response to concerns in three health centres as Longston centre, peveril centre and marchbank centre. Overall, the highest average point was given to the peveril centre with highest feedback in each aspect of service. Meanwhile, Longston centre had the lowest level of satisfaction. Besides, doctor’s service seemed to be the most highly-rated aspect in all three centers. The rating of patients for booking appointments of three centres Longston, Peveril and Marchbank with 5. 2; 9. 1 and 7. 8 respectively. The most striking feature of the graph is that in all aspects of service, doctor’s service just received excellent responses in three health centers which were above 8. Peveril centre and Marchbank centre had similar evaluating points about care of children which was 7. 5-7. 3, whereas Longston just had 6. 3. Opinion of patients for pharmacy in all centers was not high, which was just between 5 and 6, 5. Another fact worth noticing is that the response to concerns in the peveril centre was highest with 9. 6, 2 times as much as that of Longston which was 4. 3, the lowest evaluation of all.
The table demonstrates evaluations of patients for booking appointment, doctor’s
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, care of children, pharmacy, response to concerns in three health
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Longston
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peveril
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feedback in each aspect of
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Longston
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had the lowest level of satisfaction.
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seemed to be the most
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received excellent responses in three health centers which were above 8.

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Peveril
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Marchbank
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had similar evaluating points about care of children which was 7. 5-7. 3, whereas
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Longston
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had 6. 3. Opinion of patients for pharmacy in all centers was not high, which was
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between 5 and 6, 5. Another fact worth noticing is that the response to concerns in the
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was highest with 9. 6, 2 times as much as that of
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which was 4. 3, the lowest evaluation of all.
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