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Each stage of manufacturing bricks is shown in that diagram, from obtaining clay to the delivery process.

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Each stage of manufacturing bricks is shown in that diagram, from obtaining clay to the delivery process. Overall, it is seen that there are six steps to this procedure. Once the clay is obtained from a suitable area with a digger, that is sent to a factory where the whole process is done. Firstly, by using a metal grid, it is separated into small pieces that are forwarded in the roller. After that, they are shaped by two different methods, by using either wire cutter or mould are converted into two types of bricks which are seen two different shapes. Then, which are held into a drying oven during 24-48 hours, following that, they are sent to another oven. Then in this oven. There are three steps; in the first step, bricks are kept at moderate temperature; secondly, they are kept at high temperature, thirdly they are held into a cooling chamber between 48 -72 hours. After these steps, finally, bricks are packed they are given to the delivery truck to reach the relevant places.
Each stage of manufacturing
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bricks
is shown
in that diagram, from obtaining clay to the delivery process.

Overall
, it is
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seen
that there are six
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steps
to this procedure.

Once the clay
is obtained
from a suitable area with a digger,
that is
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sent
to a factory where the whole process
is done
.
Firstly
, by using a metal grid, it
is separated
into
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small
pieces that
are forwarded
in the roller. After that, they
are shaped
by two
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different
methods, by using either wire cutter or
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mould
are converted
into two types of
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bricks
which are
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seen
two
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different
shapes. Then, which
are held
into a drying oven during 24-48 hours, following that, they are
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sent
to another oven. Then in this oven. There are three
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steps
; in the
first
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step
,
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bricks
are
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kept
at moderate temperature;
secondly
, they are
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kept
at high temperature,
thirdly
they
are held
into a cooling chamber between 48 -72 hours. After these
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steps
,
finally
,
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bricks
are packed
they are
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given
to the delivery truck to reach the relevant places.
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IELTS academic Each stage of manufacturing bricks is shown in that diagram, from obtaining clay to the delivery process.

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3 paragraphs
175 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
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